Learn to forgive, you can forget.
Learn to forget, you can trust.
Learn to trust, you can love.
Learn to love, you just need to begin.
Begin to forgive, you will forget.
Begin to forget, you will trust.
Begin to trust, you will love.
Begin to love, you just need to remember.
Remember, it's not easy to forgive.
Remember, it's not easy to forget.
Remember, it's not easy to trust.
Remember, it's not easy to love.
I like the cyclical nature of this poem. Go back and think about your capitalization and punctuation. You are not wrong, but be precise. Also maybe remove the "it's not easy" part from the title.
ReplyDeleteI like the message in this poem. The structure is awesome. The poem is amaaazing :P Awesome poem.
ReplyDeleteit gives a straight forward message. needs better punctuation though
ReplyDeleteim lost!
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